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Engineer-to-Engineer Voice, with a Banlist

stratt beginner 3 min read

What this means for you

STRATT copy reads like internal documentation, not marketing. Specs, diffs, exit codes, pinned versions. Errors quote their failure-mode code rather than hiding it. Numbers are exact. Claims are demonstrated inline rather than asserted with adjectives. The emotional register is competence-without-strain; restraint signals confidence, loudness signals insecurity.

The pitch

A short banlist and a short reference list are enough. Forbidden tokens: em dashes, “delve”, “robust”, “leverage”, “navigate the complexities of”, and any superlative that softens a real number. Reference brands: Stripe Docs, Tailscale, Linear, Sigstore. Anti-references: ChatGPT, Cursor, Notion, AWS Console. Run the scene-sentence test before color or layout.

Who it’s for

The technical writer, designer, or founder drafting a paragraph for stratt.run, stratt.works, or the documentation site, and asking whether it reads as authored by an engineer or by an AI summary.

Proof points

  • PRODUCT.md Principle 4 names the banned tokens explicitly; the rule is enforced in copy review, not by hope
  • Errors expose their failure-mode code (FM-01 through FM-09) on the surface, not in a collapsed stack trace
  • stratt.run is a static-prerendered six-zone document that mirrors the audit-viewer layout; the page IS a STRATT audit slice of its own deploy
  • Override justifications under 20 characters throw OverrideRejectedError at the orchestrator boundary; the threshold is in code, not a style guide
mindmap
root((Voice))
Write like
Stripe Docs
Tailscale
Linear
Sigstore
Refuse to sound like
ChatGPT
Cursor
Notion
AWS Console
Banlist
em dash
delve
robust
leverage
navigate the complexities of
Show inline
pinned versions
exact numbers
failure-mode codes

neighbors on the map